Writing showcase

My top Three Posts are.             Best Example of my Creactivity is:
- Childhood Adventure.                      The what is beauty piece.
- The Robbery.                                        This piece shows my creativity because the things i said
- What is Beauty.                                   The things I thoughts I had when I was doing this piece.

Evidance of My Growth as a Writer:
    The piece "The Robbery" had the most things that show my growth as a writer in my opinion.
Because my piece seems even more thoughtful. & simply that piece makes me feel accomplish but thats my opinion.

Proof I am a Thinker/Learner.
The piece "The Robbery" once again, that piece shows how I improve how im a thinker because ive done in that writing what ive learned, & it shows my improvment.

The Robbery

The Robbery,

Hey my name is Tim. I am 16 years old. I live in Huston Texas, I have two younger sisters and currently live with just my mom as a only parent my father left when I was a young boy. I don't quite remember how old I was when he left because I try to forget about him, but it is hard. Well now are you ready for the next part ... Alright lets begin, Basically the story I'm about to tell you, Tells about a Sad/Exciting part in my life, I guess you would get to know me a little better while the story goes on as well.

Well one Wednesday morning I was heading to the soccer fields because I had a soccer game, yes a play soccer, honestly I love to play that sport. Been playing it since I was 2, but yea I would always play with different kids I actually never knew who I played with I would just play with anybody if it involves soccer I was always in. but I would always make new friends just by being a good player. so yea I was heading down the street then what I seen next made my life a little more interesting.

I was walking and on my right there's this one park a mom and her little daughter were there the little girl didn't look older then 2 or 3 but I was walking and I was looking at the little girl because she was so cute I was just imagining stuff like awh I wish my daughter comes out that Pretty or I wish I had a little sister like that, then this tall dude with a huge scar on his right eye ran and grabbed the little girl and ran with her the mother was screaming for help yelling with the top of her lungs.

It was hard to see that happen I was going to be late to my game but I decided to rescue the little girl because I would regret not doing it later in life, so I dropped my stuff on the floor & ran towards the man with the little girl he was not running as fast because he had the little girl in his arms so it was not hard to catch up to him so I caught up to him & tripped him I knew the little girl was going to get a little hurt but its better to get hurt a little then robbed from your moms arms, so I dropped him & as soon as the little girl dropped to the floor she was crying & panicking I guess she did not cry when he was robing her because she did not know what was going on I sopose, But she fell & the man was big so I grabbed the little girl & ran her back to her mom.

Then he was running back to us I already looked like a hero, but now I had to not let the man touch the little girl & her mother but I did not know what to do so I was just there in front of the two girls & the man was coming towards us then as soon as he was going to grab me & who knows what he was going to do to me a cop came & the cop saw the man trying to get us so the cop turned on hes siren & got out the car but the dude ran as soon as he seen the cop car he ran back to this white van I was really scared but that was an exciting moment I mean I saved a little girl so I felt really good about myself. Then after the women was telling me how grate full she was for me saving her daughter.

I was thinking about me being late to my soccer game I didn't want to miss it it was the finals there really important to me so I was talking with the women for a little while then I said I had to go & I made it to my game for 2^nd half, we ended up winning & I was really happy but I was really afraid of the man looking for me & try to get revenge or something but it never happened.

Well what had happened was. I was walking home from my friends house over the summer & then I felt something move I did not know what was going on so I just plugged in my earphone and started listening to music, music calms me down at points like this & so I was walking and I still felt like someone was behind me my house was not that far away.

        So I decided to jog but then my earphone fell off and as soon as they fell off I herd something gaining up on me so I just ran faster I didn't want to look back but I did anyway and I couldn't see where I was going so I tripped and fell then I turned and I saw this humungous looking thing running towards me in four legs.

so I stood up quick and ran as fast as I could run but the thing was that, the thing was faster then me.

         So it bit me, I turned around and saw it biting my behind and it was a Big Brown pitbull dog it was pretty one but it was ugly because it was mad so I picked up my leg & kicked it, then I just ran home and was terrified the rest of my life, but that dog left her mark on my butt so I guess I wont forget that day.