State Cup.

      I cant belive we made it this far im going to State Cup with my soccer team this is gonna be the hardest & the greatest game ever Final Four in the State this is a huge accomplishment im so proud of myself & my team we have been trying so hard to get here cant belive we really did it, Now our goal is to go to Regionals & if posible Nationals, That would be the best thing ever. But for those who dont know The State Cup is where teams from around the state go & play its a Tornament so its multiple games but its really fun, Last year when we played State Cup it was in Myrtle Beach it was so cool our Hotel was right next to the Beach. At night the Beach was so Beatifull. & if you win State Cup you go play Regionals I think Regionals this year is in Colorado im not sure but wouldent it be awsome to go play in Colorado. & Nationals in California my home state i actually dont know where in California but its in California i hope its in L.A Claifornia My Homestate(: they told me Nationals come on on T.v I dont know if whoever told me lied to me, but if we actially come on t.v I would be crazy I would feel Professional & awsome. But I hope it goes well for us, Wish us Luck!

Sometimes, Mothers are Cruel

     Sometimes, Mothers are Cruel they get home from work and start screaming at you for no reason at all, but then again it might just be my mom she probably had a bad day? But its funny she starts yelling for no reason because i haven't done nothing wrong neither have my sisters, but when she gets home from work me & my two sisters have a good laugh because we think my mom’s weird & then when she notices she laughs too but shes the best mom couldn't ask for better. mothers can sometimes be really cruel by not letting you go hang out with friends but you can't argue with the women if she’s anything like my mother she would shut you down the first word you say. but my mom & all the mothers around the world have my respect  their strong womens they keep annoying kids & be with them until they grow older & go that's years of taking care of a child. so do the dads but lets face it we all know moms do all the work dads just discipline them well most of them do. Moms are also Cruel when they decide to bully you i don’t know if its just my mom who does that but its not funny moms’ aren't supposed to do that, but i guess my mothers fun like that Moral of the story is moms can always be cruel but  you still love her(:

Once upon a time...

    Once upon a time there was a young boy named Jimmy, Jimmy loved this one sport people would often tell him he seemed obsessed with soccer but he didn’t think so, he just knew that he really loved the game. he would always say he mostly loves the feeling when he scores a goal, or the feeling when they win the victory. He was still a kid though well that’s what older kids would often say but Jimmy never gave up he always kept trying his best, it was good though because he was better then some of the older guys. so when Jimmy played soccer with them older guys they would see Jimmy as somebody better they would also treat him better. “That’s why you don’t judge a book by its cover”, Jimmy was a talented kid he said one day he would like to make it into the big leagues being a pro.

Hunger Games Movie Review

I thought the movie was good but that the book was better if the movie would of had every detail the book had i bet the movie would be better but i did like the movie dont get me wrong but i dislike the part that they left out alot of parts. My Rating for the movie is 3 stars & my Rating for the book is 4 because well as i said before I liked the book better. my favorite scene in the movie was when the wolfs came out I thought that was pritty cool. my favorite character was Tresh i thought it was cool how he saved katness from getting killed because how katness said bye to Rue. It was a sad scene when Rue died, to be honest it got me a little sad. My opinion of the movie was that it was good but then again the book was better, thats my opinion.

Unwind

So the book Im reading is Unwind & so far its a good book it always has something new when you think the good parts is over more come at you & your never bored reading this book I really like it. its Crazy like, it shows how each Charecter sees what happens like it shows there point of view, & its really intersting. The part I like the most is when they Jumped the cop & shot him, it was crazy, Conner Risa & Lev are smart but the have those Dumb moments like Conner did something dumb, so now they have a baby with them, Something dumb, It will be harder because they barly have food for themselfs & now they got to feed another person... a baby cant wait to keep reading to see whats going to happen next !

I'm Still Young

I’m still young
I’m still wild
I’m still a kid
I’m still a child
I’m still that little browned eyed kid

    Who once thought x-man would rule the world, im still that boy who thought Santa Clause was real so i always leave him a meal on the kitchen counter, cookies with milk, always proud of his abilities i mean all around the world in one night, i was impressed i also remember i would fight with my friends of him being real they just didn’t understand how i feel.
    i was that little boy who always thought hearts didn’t heal, im still that symbol of innocence believing in love and no consequence, i’m still the one who watches the sunset but sometimes hide in the closet because scared of what life brings to him, i’m still the one who is just learning to read, slowly and steadily building up my speed, i’m still energetic always ending up feeling apologetic, i was that kid with the toothy smile the one who always watched Barny for a while. I’m still that boy with the wispy black hair, throwing everything to the wind finding a reason to care.

Alliteration

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Writing showcase

My top Three Posts are.             Best Example of my Creactivity is:
- Childhood Adventure.                      The what is beauty piece.
- The Robbery.                                        This piece shows my creativity because the things i said
- What is Beauty.                                   The things I thoughts I had when I was doing this piece.

Evidance of My Growth as a Writer:
    The piece "The Robbery" had the most things that show my growth as a writer in my opinion.
Because my piece seems even more thoughtful. & simply that piece makes me feel accomplish but thats my opinion.

Proof I am a Thinker/Learner.
The piece "The Robbery" once again, that piece shows how I improve how im a thinker because ive done in that writing what ive learned, & it shows my improvment.

The Robbery

The Robbery,

Hey my name is Tim. I am 16 years old. I live in Huston Texas, I have two younger sisters and currently live with just my mom as a only parent my father left when I was a young boy. I don't quite remember how old I was when he left because I try to forget about him, but it is hard. Well now are you ready for the next part ... Alright lets begin, Basically the story I'm about to tell you, Tells about a Sad/Exciting part in my life, I guess you would get to know me a little better while the story goes on as well.

Well one Wednesday morning I was heading to the soccer fields because I had a soccer game, yes a play soccer, honestly I love to play that sport. Been playing it since I was 2, but yea I would always play with different kids I actually never knew who I played with I would just play with anybody if it involves soccer I was always in. but I would always make new friends just by being a good player. so yea I was heading down the street then what I seen next made my life a little more interesting.

I was walking and on my right there's this one park a mom and her little daughter were there the little girl didn't look older then 2 or 3 but I was walking and I was looking at the little girl because she was so cute I was just imagining stuff like awh I wish my daughter comes out that Pretty or I wish I had a little sister like that, then this tall dude with a huge scar on his right eye ran and grabbed the little girl and ran with her the mother was screaming for help yelling with the top of her lungs.

It was hard to see that happen I was going to be late to my game but I decided to rescue the little girl because I would regret not doing it later in life, so I dropped my stuff on the floor & ran towards the man with the little girl he was not running as fast because he had the little girl in his arms so it was not hard to catch up to him so I caught up to him & tripped him I knew the little girl was going to get a little hurt but its better to get hurt a little then robbed from your moms arms, so I dropped him & as soon as the little girl dropped to the floor she was crying & panicking I guess she did not cry when he was robing her because she did not know what was going on I sopose, But she fell & the man was big so I grabbed the little girl & ran her back to her mom.

Then he was running back to us I already looked like a hero, but now I had to not let the man touch the little girl & her mother but I did not know what to do so I was just there in front of the two girls & the man was coming towards us then as soon as he was going to grab me & who knows what he was going to do to me a cop came & the cop saw the man trying to get us so the cop turned on hes siren & got out the car but the dude ran as soon as he seen the cop car he ran back to this white van I was really scared but that was an exciting moment I mean I saved a little girl so I felt really good about myself. Then after the women was telling me how grate full she was for me saving her daughter.

I was thinking about me being late to my soccer game I didn't want to miss it it was the finals there really important to me so I was talking with the women for a little while then I said I had to go & I made it to my game for 2^nd half, we ended up winning & I was really happy but I was really afraid of the man looking for me & try to get revenge or something but it never happened.

Well what had happened was. I was walking home from my friends house over the summer & then I felt something move I did not know what was going on so I just plugged in my earphone and started listening to music, music calms me down at points like this & so I was walking and I still felt like someone was behind me my house was not that far away.

        So I decided to jog but then my earphone fell off and as soon as they fell off I herd something gaining up on me so I just ran faster I didn't want to look back but I did anyway and I couldn't see where I was going so I tripped and fell then I turned and I saw this humungous looking thing running towards me in four legs.

so I stood up quick and ran as fast as I could run but the thing was that, the thing was faster then me.

         So it bit me, I turned around and saw it biting my behind and it was a Big Brown pitbull dog it was pretty one but it was ugly because it was mad so I picked up my leg & kicked it, then I just ran home and was terrified the rest of my life, but that dog left her mark on my butt so I guess I wont forget that day.

Childhood Adventures

Well it all started when I moved house to concored, I was a total stranger I didnt know anybody there & it was boring until one day I went out to throw away the garbage, I saw like 2 kids of my age, they saw me too. when they saw me they were coming towerds me I didnt know what to do so I just threw away the trash & waited for them to come to me, when they came at me we started talking & we were talking for a long while, It turned out we had alot in commen we all loved soccer then we started playing everytime afterschool they said I was a good player, & to tell you the truth they where really good it was really hard for me to get to there level but we were really young by then, 

Now that were older I give them more competition, But we been friends since then, & now im going to tell you about some of our adventures haha well we would always make the maneger mad we would make little club houses wich he would hate alot, once we made a clubhouse in the bushes & he came so we raan & as soon as Ran out I hit my head in this metal pointy thing.

First I just felt the hit but I didnt think I cut my head then I remember I left my shoes in there so I ran back & I got my shoes, Then I ran out again & I hit my head again then I just started running home till I felt something cold running down the side of my head I reached & felt & it was some type of liquid so I was confussed then I saw my hand & it was filled with blood & then the blood started running down my eyes & I just ran home. When I got home my mom was eating I ran in scared & she was like what happend Jordin I didnt say anything because I was to terrefied I thought I was going to die because well I was just a kid & a really scared kid so I didnt know what to think, so then I went up stairs to my grandma she tried to stop the blood from flowing out because I was losing alot of it, & while my grandma was doing that my mom called the ambulance & then my dad got home from work as soon as the ambulance came.

He didnt know what was going on until he saw me, So he came with me to the emergency room i felt reallly dizzy they wrapped something around my head so blood wont flow out anymore, But I felt really really dizzy so I think I feel asleep I dont realy remember, & then the docter called us up because it was our turn to go up there so my dad woked me up. Then they took me to this room & the docters put stiches in my head it didnt hurt that much because they did it with this gun I felt the pressure though but I was still scared I wanted to cry, But noo I helt it in so then we went home really late because we took forever in the hospital, but we went home & I felt really nasty really sick & I smelt like blood it wasent a plesent smell at that point.

 So the next daay I stayed home allday but my friends came over to check on me they treated me like a king haha it was good(: I reallized they were there for me but now I dont have them as friends nomore we all got seperated. But after that accident, welll after I got better we still had some more intersting adventures I would never forget my childhood its unforgettible.